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Deep in thought
I ponder my feelings
The confusion in my senses,
The pounding of my heart,
The overwhelming reality
That is processed by this mind of mine

I long for her touch,
For her kiss
To gaze into her eyes
I long to be at peace
Deep within myself,
Away from everything
Seeing through walls and people
This so-called civilized culture
Out and away and free
If only I could take her there
Then I would find my peace
©2008 ~Schizmist
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a very very random poem
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~Viomoro:iconViomoro: May 15, 2008, 11:52:06 PM
i feel you emotions, very good poem

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You can't change the world! You can change a person.
why can we change a person but not people?
=Amriah:iconAmriah: May 16, 2008, 12:17:43 AM
I can tell that you've been struggling with the problems we've been having to go through lately just as much as I have. I want to be at peace with you, to enjoy your world as much as I enjoy mine.

I want to be free with you... my beloved, my Miser, my heart, my lover. I want to be free with you.

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“A word of advice from one Reaper to another,” Kyniel took a defensive stance. “Never let your ego get the best of you.”
The Realm Within
~Schizmist:iconSchizmist: May 16, 2008, 1:12:52 AM
thank you, did you like it?

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CULTURAL COMATOSE
~Schizmist:iconSchizmist: May 16, 2008, 1:13:41 AM
and we will be, right?

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CULTURAL COMATOSE
=Amriah:iconAmriah: May 16, 2008, 1:16:17 AM
Yes, we will be. I firmly believe that.

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“A word of advice from one Reaper to another,” Kyniel took a defensive stance. “Never let your ego get the best of you.”
The Realm Within
~Viomoro:iconViomoro: May 16, 2008, 1:18:23 AM
yeah, love poetry is my favorite

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You can't change the world! You can change a person.
why can we change a person but not people?
~Viomoro:iconViomoro: May 16, 2008, 1:19:26 AM
I'm an idiot

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You can't change the world! You can change a person.
why can we change a person but not people?
~KiNgFRoStY187183:iconKiNgFRoStY187183: May 16, 2008, 9:18:49 PM
heh, i know exactly what this feels like...very deep. very strong use of emotion. I really like it
Raven:....emotions are irrelevant, there an obstacle and a hindarence...they are an unecceassary luxury...though i can understand your pain, and desire for freedom...

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"If life was full of only good things what would be the point of living? We as people live through the hard things to enjoy the few good things even more."
~Schizmist:iconSchizmist: May 16, 2008, 9:22:37 PM
your such a hopeless romantic *thumbs up*

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CULTURAL COMATOSE